Today's was really boring day for me. As i wake early in morning and look out through window it was snowing too much. I really hate snow. Last winter I fell down on snow too badly. It hurt my back and took almost a week to recover. I went to school little early since; I have to finish my world history homework. It was hard and lots, but then also I already finished 3 out of 7 questions before the warning bell in the morning. I was little happy that my world history class is on third block and I thought I have enough up time to finish it on homeroom or core but unfortunately Mr. sieve announced that "due to bad weather we will have noon dismissal". Luckily World history teacher doesn't care about the home-work and I get saved. I had hoped to complete it by tonight.
Tuesday, February 9, 2010
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Hi Chudamuni,
Good job on keeping up with your blog. Keep up the good work. You should be making at least two entries every week.
In your writing, make capitalize "I" when referring to yourself. For instance, in the sentence... "As i wake early in morning and look out through window it was snowing too much." The I should have been capitalized. Also be careful with the "ed" endings on verbs which indicate past tense. For instance in your previous entry, in the sentence... "we had to walked for a couple of minute to get to water-tap...", you should have said walk not walked. I know that can be a little confusing. I will explain in more detail in class. In that same sentence also watch your plurals. Since you meant to say it took many "minutes" to walk to the pump (more than one minute) you need to add the "s" indicating more than one.
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